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Link: http://www.shrovetuesdayobserved.com/flight.html

Mark Rosenfelder writes If all stories were written like science fiction stories. Here's an excerpt:

Roger and Ann needed to meet Sergey in San Francisco.

"Should we take a train, or a steamship, or a plane?" asked Ann.

"Trains are too slow, and the trip by steamship around South America would take months," replied Roger. "We'll take a plane."

He logged onto the central network using his personal computer, and waited while the system verified his identity. With a few keystrokes he entered an electronic ticketing system, and entered the codes for his point of departure and his destination. In moments the computer displayed a list of possible flights, and he picked the earliest one. Dollars were automatically deducted from his personal account to pay for the transaction.

Go there to read all 827 words. Counted via to Gender Genie, which says the style is male.

Permalink Tue 19-Oct-2004

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